Growing up in the age of industry in the city of London could be a miserable existence. Living in the workhouse and working every hour God sent sweating in the mill made Harry’s life difficult, dangerous and miserable.
He had a dream that could change his life forever…
Harry was all by himself because he did not know his parents. Harry was living in an old shaggy rusty house. Harry did have a bed pillow and blanket. Harry always had a dream of becoming a musician, the best one in London and he would want to move. Because it was still the industrial revolution. So he still had a job to do but everytime Harry would finish he would always play his violin. So whatever they do to him do extra things he would still love playing his violin. Harry would do anything to get his violin then one day his boss went inside his house and stole Harry's violin to make his life more miserable. Then in the morning Harry woke up and saw his violin was gone then he went outside and saw his boss had his violin. Harry tried to get it back but his boss was too tall. And harry’s only ten then one day harry went to go to his boss’s place to take his violin back and his name was mister smi. Smi was so rich cause he got kids to do his dirty work. So Harry wanted to get revenge for what he did to the kids and him. So Harry sneaked in his boss's house and he saw his violin. Harry knew karta move’s. That he had from a book then Harry karata chopped his boss and he went for an extra sleep. Then Harry took his volin then went back home. In the morning Mr. smi was so angry he gave Harry extra work to do. Before he would go home then after that harry still had his dream and he would always keep it. Harry had a friend too his best friend his name was Tane and that was always tane no one else just tane. Harry would always say his jokes to Tane and Tane would always laugh. And Harry said when we moved from London To new zealand. They were flying away from london to nz cause nz was better than london. Then they made it to new zealand and the industrial revolution was over. And Harry was so happy the revolution was over and he got his dream so then they shot them down. Because they were still on the iron man gloves. Then we kept on winning then we shot them with water balloons and they runned away. And then they flyed away to NZ and all of them had a better life and Harry took his dog to his violin and he got his dream to the end.
Kia ora Kahu - ka rawe! You have a really creative mind! NZ is way better then London - much more green and less pollution!
ReplyDeleteCan you make sure you put in capital letters for the names of countries, could you also put your ideas into paragraphs?
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