Rata and his waka

We have been doing some critical thinking with the Story of Rata of the Waka

110 wc week 1

walt to use 100 words to write a story I was at a dark graveyard. I could not see anything. But I saw crimson blood on a gravestone. I must be closer The wind was getting colder and colder. I felt like a hand was behind me I Turned around it was a zombie. I run as fast as I could I stopped all I had was a flashlight but I hit The zombie with my flashlight and his head was flying but I still ran I stop The gate siad dead end so I jumped over The gate I had a legend book about zombie’s I could do crazy stuff with it. I opened The book and the sun burned The zombies. The sunlight burns Them to death so I went back to my house I had amer behind my tshirt and hep’s of weapons but I didnt bring My weapons. but only if They bit Me I had same friends so They help Me so we went there again so I prove it to them so we went again and a zombie came out and I burned it to death and it was dead and they believed me forever. The end.