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Thursday 27 August 2020

The tombstone

 


Dan was walking then he came across a grave that said ‘R.I.P Jahseh’ he was a rapper in florida. But dan saw a word that said ‘if you open it hell will break loose’. Like so many things will break out of the tombstone. Dan was a big fan of this rapper Then Dan went near where his friends were. and  then Dan went to open it then he felt dark power. Like Really strong dark power but he let go then Dan knew this rapper was trying to come out of his grave so he could feel alive again but he knew it was a devil not his favorite rapper Dan left and talked about how he talked to the archaeologists about what he felt on the grave. But Dan didn’t trust the grave so he opened it then hell actually broke loose. The devil and so many monsters' souls came out of the grave. Then a person came out with a halo over his head. And he had yellow and black hair. And he had wings he told Dan ‘why did you open my grave’. Dan said ‘cause your my favorite rapper’ then Dan's favorite rapper told him to call him x for short for his rap name. Then he chased after the devil dan followed x and x was chasing the devil then the devil touched x then x turned into a devil with short horns. And blue and red hair and his eyes were outlined with blue then Dan saw x. Dan just met him and he turned into a devil. Dan was angry at the devil for what he did to his favorite rapper. Then his rapper was coming for Dan and Dan was driving his car. Then his rapper punched the hood of the cars then and hopped out of the car. Then the car exploded then the scientist grabbed strong chemicals. To save Dan they threw a green experiment then the rapper got stronger and his arm was a skeleton arm. Then red veins where going down his arm he was getting stronger and stronger. Dan got up and shot him with his pistol then the rapper looked back and there was a scientist still alive!. Then the rapper walked to him and picked him up and then he snapped his neck. And it was Dan's best friend berry Dan got up and runned as fast as he can from the rapper. Dan hid where x is tombstone house is and he hid in his grave. Then Dan was so quiet the rapper walked past him. ‘Well that’s what Dan thought’. When Dan came out the rapper was waiting there the whole time. X grabbed his neck and Dan was choking then he had his secret weapon a sticky bomb. He placed it on x then it exploded the rapper was flying away. Cause of the explosion x was flying so far into a jungle. Then a tiger saw the rapper and the tiger attacked him but the rapper grabbed his neck and cracked it. The tiger was paralized and the tiger's  eyes were gray. Then another tiger attacked x and x looked at the tiger and the tiger’s eye turned gray too. X has the pennen stare it will show you what or a person has done in the past but the person will see the evil that you did in the past. What the rapper saw was that the tiger ate its own child. Then x chucked the body in the lake and blood then the tigers blood was going down the lake. Then Dan had a new buggy then Dan saw the rapper. And looked in the lake and it was a tiger's body. Then x flu away with his angel wings. X went into the lake and it was two hours he turned back into an angel. And x was so confused about what he did. Then he saw the tiger then he remembered that the tiger was going to attack him. But he said that he cracked his neck. Then his two twins the black and blue hair and the gray hair x’s. They are going to help him control the devil inside of him. So blue gray x helped him and they went into a peaceful place. X was feeling his devil him leaving then x was brightening into gold and now he is an angle. Then he saw the devil and all the rapper did he touched him and so was the devil he was shining so bright he died. And his head was a skull on fire. Dan wanted to spend more time with him. But the rapper had to go with god. So Dan said his last words and let him go. The rapper was in heaven with god now. The end.


1 comment:

  1. Kia ora Kahurangi.
    I really like that you have written so much.You have some great ideas.
    Maybe next time you could write a smaller amount and make sure that what you write has punctuation.

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