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Thursday, 19 November 2020

THE SHADOW

 


Zack was on a boat traveling to New york to california but he wanted it to be long so he could have a long nap but as his boat keeps floating he felt a big bump so he woke up and looked outside and he looked so confused were he was going so he goes on his phone cause he has free internet and his charger and he had a look on google maps and he was stuck in the middle of nowhere. Then his phone was going to die soon so he turned the brightness so he had enough time to text his friend. Jin is a pilot so he had an idea to text him and send him a location where he was but then he heard a creeking noise up in the house but zack couldn't see that well because it was foggy when zack finished climbing the ladder he saw a lanturne then a small house then he heard someone waking up he took a video of it. Then when it came out of the little shack it was a shadow that can pesses things zack sprinted to his electric boat and the oger was roaring at zack started the boat and zoomed off away from him he took a big breath then he 

had a look at the video and he posted it online when he got to his high school Bronx HS. He took a deep breath and he walked inside the school and everyone was crowding him cause he found a myth everyone wanted to see but his bully’s Jackson and Jax thought that he photoshopped it so they pushed him around but the famous football team were his guard’s. So jackson didn't get bullied anymore but his best friend’s Jacob and damon didn't believe it so in that evening he took them on the boat the same boat that Zack saw the oger he replayed the video just in case it was the wrong house he knocked on the door and his friends started video recording and his friend were wondering why there were one other house at the bottom and the other one took a video then Zack knocked on the door and then the oger kicked the door opened and it took all three of them together on the boat all three of them spat out blood then zack looked at Jacob and damon and said do you believe me now and they shook their head and took long deep breaths. And went back to their house there next door too. So the next day the biked to school together and they made it when the bell ringed but all three of them just made it into there class with Mrs. Apple

They just about made it and Mrs. apple had a furious look on her face at Zack and Jacob and Damon she sent them to the principal Mr. Jack he talked to them about the video the posted on Instagram and facebook then Zack and jacob looked at each other then looked at damon and after school they went over to the Shadow’s house cause people keep texting that it is fake again over and over and over but they had 1.8 million people watching them go into the house.  But the ogre was possessed then Zack fell on the floor and jacob Damon put them to sleep cause he was a demon that made the ogre but took his power he grabbed zack and jacob and put them in the house with the ogre but when the woke up they started to attacked the oger then they realized that damon was gone so they started to punched the ogre in the stomach but the oger punched him so hard he got knocked out and slept for a long time and then they put him back at his place and he slept for a long time the end. 

1 comment:

  1. Kia ora Kahurangi.
    I was looking forward to reading your post but the words are shooting across the page as if they are having a race.This makes reading hard.If there is any chance you could fix it let me know please as I would like to read it.

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