Tuesday, 2 July 2019
Ruin
Ruin
Once upon a future the was a man named ruin he could listen
to
everything circuits water tripping he was in this world since The robots taken over and
he was a robotic weapon he is a robot and he could hack into systems and make damaged devices to work them again and he had super hearing
but he was nothing like people
He was wanted and in The future and he was dangerous to the most dangerous aliens he had to fight
back to protect himself with a lighting blue katana and he got caught and he ran to his motorbike he hop in it and started to drive and
there
were aliens chasing him and the tried and ruin throw dynamite
at the spacshpe and The spaceship pulled out two drowned and
ruin went inside alleyway and it was dark inside
the alleyway no lights expect The drones
and ruin had nightfusion he could see he dogged three cars and they were finished throw the alleyway and ruin throw c4’s on the ground
And the drones blow up and The spaceship was in ruin
way
ruin grabbed his sword and it had lighting inside his
sword it was blue and ruin did a clean slices
in the spaceship in half and when he cut the
spaceship in alphf There was a light color on both
sides and all The drones
exploded and
The
spaceship was trying to shoot ruin off
his
bike and
ruin
went passed The spaceship and ruin geos
Right
and he
jumps off his motorbike and he does a front-flip
and he changes his sword and he stabs
The spaceship
and
The spaceship was going crazy because ruin
was charging it and it
was going to blow
up and ruin
was still alive and ruin takes his sword off The
spaceship and There was a little blue electric
when ruin walk off and drives back to The
phone to rework it again and it was a little
bit broken but it
was working and ruin went to go into other business buildings
The first building
was haven technology
was the first one ruin
went in and ruin was
wearing a future jacket a red hat with earrings
on it and it
was rusty and a tecnologie kitana it can reverses energy
that’s already full it will blow up and ruin walked off To be continued...
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Kia ora Kahurangi.
ReplyDeleteYou have written heaps.Well done.
I did however,not read all your story. I found it very hard to follow.You have forgotten to use full stops even though you have capital letters in your work.There's a lot going on and it didn't make sense to me.
Maybe next time,you could write less and concentrate on that small amount of work.