fast writing

This week we have been how to create a piece of writing using a picture to help us. First we had a class brainstorm on what The picture was about Then we brainstormed same adjectives. finally we started our writing. I am sharing it with you please leave me a comment. Thanks!

One day Zack saw people. They got captured in black net and trying to escape he try to help. They were there for a week and same of them got bony and same were still alive and same where gone. There was a big footprint and it was bigger than anyone else is one in front of them and one on the right and I can small devastating. bones and rotten staff and a lake in The middle of the people and it small  gross and descaistain and it had dead fish inside it and it was starting to rain. The forest was far from homes and town and zack's saw something else it was a reindeer and it was scared so it run away. and sack went in the bush and I got same water. The water was turning red and I sort the deer it cracked it’s leg and I run back and sack sort more people on the ground. Zack help it and it could walk not run for now and so sack went back to the dead people and sack search them. Then I fall down on a log and one of them stinks and sack got back up on sack got dirt on sacks pants and sack went inside the forest. I went and sack went inside and sack sort a crashed. plane and he went inside to not get wet and he had food and a blanket to stay warm and the next day he woke and he packed his staff and he still moved on and on. Every next day sometimes he stays inside broken buildings and other stuff like that and one day he found

a person and he was fighting a deer and the deer stab him in the leg and he scream and he help The guy getting killed by The deer. He killed The deer with a rock and he went with him and he was in The same area but he sort The same Thing but he sort same Thing different. He sort fire. on one of The dead people and he went same where he could look for same water and he found water in The middle of The dead people after The drink he heard someone say watch out and he zack and a person was alive and he tripped and he went inside. a waterfall and he went inside and he They started to fight because They were fighting how got here first his name was jack and his name was sack and They felt like brothers and They help ecather escape but one of The got hang and on The leg and he had a knight and he cut it and he fall inside The water and They went out and They were finding a way to get out and They were at The same place over and over again and They were tiad and They took a nap The haven't sleep for a day and They woke up and They found a dog liking Them and They woke up and They keep’d it and he went to sleep near a water and They went to go and hunt for same food and The found a bull and They ate him and one of The brothers got a broken arm and he had to go to sleep early so did his brother zack’s arm held The next morning. and They went to go walk to go far and one day They were so confused where They were going and so They started to get wood to make a house out of it and it work with vies to use vines and The went inside The wood house because it was raining and a Tornado was coming and it blew There house down and one of Them survived but one died and he saw a doctor air plane and it picked zacks brother and zack"s brother is named jack and zack came to and They seen There mother again and him and his brother haven't came back and one day They sort a plane and it bring Them back home and The can see. There mother again and They bring The dog with Them home.